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Old 06-20-2006, 04:06 AM   #4
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Default Re: SiN Episodes: Emergence review for my website.

The review is well done. I like that you highlighted key words throughout the review: it makes it look slick. Your tone is fine and the humor isn't overbearing. You covered pretty much all the interesting aspects of Emergence.
There wasn't much discussion about what is not good about Emergence besides the fact that blade doesn't talk much. You could have mentioned some bugs from before the patch or if there was anything in general that wasn't as good as it could have been. It's important to talk about negative things in a review so it doesn't look like you're ignoring other perspectives.
I have a formatting criticism even if you don't really care. It'll be better to split your review into a few pages instead of having one big scrolling page. I almost didn't want to read it because I thought it was going to be too long.
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